Well I’ve locked the door
And I’ve won the war
But I can’t help but feel at a loss
I’ve found what’s worth, fighting for
And I’ve found my way to shore
But still I can’t help but wonder the cost
Chorus:
Because I’ve lost my way
And I’ve got nothing to say
I get lost in the thinnest moss
‘Cause I’ve lost my way
And I’ve got nothing to say
It seems everything’s up for the toss
Well I found the cure
And I need no more
But I can’t help but feel the cross
Well I’ve discovered the lore
And I’ve fed the poor
But still I can’t help but close the locks
Chorus
Well I’ve watched the plant, grow from the spore
And I’ve found what can’t be torn
But I can’t help but give in to the shocks
Well I’ve found what feeds the core
And I’ve run the endless store
But still I can’t help but fall on the rocks
Chorus
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For those of you who already know about this (aka
 and  ) yes I finally finished it. (Well, maybe. Let me know if you think I should change anything or make it longer or shorter or whatever) And for everyone else, this is a song I wrote at camp that I finally finished. Again, please let me know what you think, if I should change anything, make it longer or shorter, etc.Also, I have no idea what category this belongs in. |
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OMG!! This is absolutely amazing!!!! I can't favorite it enough!! (damn...)
"Well I’ve watched the plant, grow from the spore
And I’ve found what can’t be torn
But I can’t help but give in to the shocks
I’ve found what feeds the core
And I’ve run the endless store
But still I can’t help but fall on the rocks"
My favorite part out of this entirely amazing poem!
Is that Advanced enough critique?
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So let me get this straight. You want to fly on a magic carpet to see the king of the potato people and plead for your freedom..... and you're telling me you're completely sane? (Arnold Rimmer from Red Dwarf)
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And I agree
But that's okay
That's the way I like to be"
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